Happy Mother’s Day, everyone! Time for another Weekend Writing Warriors snippet. Every Sunday, I join a bunch of writers through a blog hop and post an 8-10 sentence snippet of my current project. You can click on the link to see what everyone else is up to.
Last week, I asked for advice relating to fairy tale retellings—mainly where I should put the information about an obscure fairy tale that informs the reader but makes them feel smart. I haven’t decided yet what to do with the prologue, but I at least attempted to rewrite this snippet that follows last week’s snippet. I’m thinking this is the place to start talking about tale parallels. Due to the WeWriWa rules, you’ll get part one and next week will wrap up this bit. What do you think?
I gave him a look, and wrote to him, How is some fairytale going to help me? He paused to read the words and shrugged his shoulders.
“Just read this and you tell me if it helps.”
He gave me the Danish version of the fairytale and he sat there and read over my shoulder as I read “The Wild Swans.” All of a sudden my gut started to ache.
A wicked stepmother, a crap-ton of brothers, the speech spell, everything. Okay, I don’t have a wicked stepmother, but there’s someone who wanted to get ahead by cursing a girl and her brothers. The princely brothers flew away as swans, and the princess had to find out on her own how to save them. A figure in a dream lays out her quest: she has to make nettle shirts that will turn her brothers back into swans. It explains the dreams I have about thorns and needles.
It’s felt really good to scrap some bad/lame stuff and replace it with better words. I plan on taking the week off from social media (Heaven help us) to focus more on my writing, and I’m excited to see where that goal will lead me.
Until then, check out other snippets here. You can also learn more about the novel, Speechless, here. Don’t forget to comment below if you’ve got a snippet to share as well! Compliments and constructive insight are equally welcome.