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Weekend Writing Warriors: Snippet 29

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Time for another Weekend Writing Warriors snippet. Every Sunday, I join a bunch of writers through a blog hop and post an 8-10 sentence snippet of my current project. You can click on the link to see what everyone else is up to.

Oh man. NaNoWriMo brings me to one of my favorite parts of the novel—meeting Wren, Bear, Fox, and Ape. These are Yildirim soldiers working on a large ship under Reuben’s command, but only half-heartedly. In a time where Ilsi feels alone and misused, these characters give her something to smile about. Guaranteed some of my favorite characters to write about—besides Reshma!

“Quick, Wren,” Bear said, nudging him, “say something to get her to like us.”

“What, you don’t think you’re charming enough on your own?” Wren rolled his eyes. He reverted his attention to Ilsi and said, “This may sound weird coming from us, but being friends with the crew is probably your best move.”

“Best move for what?” Ilsi said. It was then she noticed that not a single crew member was wearing a red amulet. She wasn’t forced to wear one, either.

“I assume you’re not staring at my chest because it’s hairy,” Wren said, as if reading her mind; Ilsi blushed in reply. “There’s no need for mind control on this ship—we’re the defects.”

“Wait,” Ilsi said, putting her spoon down, “you’re rebels?”

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Weekend Writing Warriors: Snippet 27

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Time for another Weekend Writing Warriors snippet. Every Sunday, I join a bunch of writers through a blog hop and post an 8-10 sentence snippet of my current project. You can click on the link to see what everyone else is up to.

This week was another blessed hack-and-slash session in regards to my novel. There’s something exciting about finally cutting out useless scenes that don’t further the plot and replacing them with things that do. Decluttering at its finest. So in a way, this snippet represents the surviving parts that I kept this week.

At this point, Ilsi’s objective is to find Giselle, who is so old and powerful, no one really knows the extent of her abilities; they just feel like having someone like that on their side is better than having her for an enemy. Ilsi tries to encourage her to see things her way, and we see Giselle’s friendly and grandma-like facade finally crack away a bit.

“It’s funny you’re asking an old lady like me to be a soldier,” Giselle shook her head and laughed.

“I’m asking if you’re willing to be an ally,” Ilsi explained. “We really need your help if we’re ever going to win this war.”

“Whatever it is you think you need from me, it won’t be enough.”

“But they threatened to find you,” Ilsi emphasized. “Why let them win and terrorize and—”

“Because I’m tired of fighting other people’s battles!” Giselle roared, spitting harshly. After Giselle coughed harshly for a bit and wiped her lips with her sleeve, she rattled, “If you want to fight Ladala’s fight, I can’t stop you, dear child. But I’m done. I’ve done enough fighting.”

Check out other snippets here. You can also learn more about the novel, Destiny Seeker, here. Don’t forget to comment below if you’ve got a snippet to share as well! Compliments and constructive insight are equally welcome.

Weekend Writing Warriors: Snippet 26

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Time for another Weekend Writing Warriors snippet. Every Sunday, I join a bunch of writers through a blog hop and post an 8-10 sentence snippet of my current project. You can click on the link to see what everyone else is up to.

Oh my days. This week, I somehow managed to combine materials from three chapters into one this week! It was mainly because I’ve killed some darlings in previous chapters and had to keep taking out more that didn’t apply to the story anymore. I did get to revisit a favorite passage of mine, just because the scene came super clear in my mind so I was able to write what I wanted.

In this passage, Ilsi overhears a Yildirim commander talking with another high-ranking gent about their progress in searching for Ilsi and her friends. Ilsi rightfully questions their abilities as soldiers after they talk, search the area, and move on without finding the girls.

“Now gather everyone, and we’ll leave immediately. This search is getting more and more absurd,” the commander announced, muttering the last sentiment more to himself.

The sound of marching feet soon died away. Ilsi bit her lip as she shook her head furiously.

Those men didn’t come anywhere near us. They are either dimwits and don’t know how to properly find two young girls, or they knew how close they were hiding and talked loud enough for them to hear.

Is it a trap? Was all of that a show for us?

Ilsi’s gets the feeling during this passage that these soldiers think that looking for Ilsi and her new friend, Gilly, is a fool’s errand. Orders are orders, right? However, Ilsi has to act fast to get a step or two ahead of these soldiers.

Check out other snippets here. You can also learn more about the novel, Destiny Seeker, here. Don’t forget to comment below if you’ve got a snippet to share as well! Compliments and constructive insight are equally welcome.

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